This is an old writing piece I did for an advanced creative writing class in university way back in 2018. I’ve always intended to make this a full solar system set, but life likes to get in the way. Maybe in the distant future I might, but not when university, especially final year, is looming over me.
To Earth, From Jupiter
The sun was only a hundred million years old when I began to form, the embryo of a gas giant. I wasn’t much to look at, at first, a bundle of rocks coalescing to form a solid core the size of your Earth. While I was the sole planet in the solar system, I wasn’t completely alone, for I had the proto-sun as my companion, competing for the copious amounts of hydrogen available to us alone. That ringed show-off you named Saturn formed shortly after. And no, it didn’t yet have rings—still a giant nuisance though, raining on my fun. If it weren’t for Saturn, I would have drawn as close to the sun as I dared, and it would be us alone, with all the hydrogen to ourselves. But no, Saturn had to form and nothing was the same after that gas giant began to steal more hydrogen for itself. Rude.
Listen, I was a crazy young bundle of tiny planetisimals running on young protoplanet legs to the Sun. I may have kicked out (or eaten) tiny forming planets and perhaps smacked one into magma-laden Earth, but I was starry-eyed, eager to get up close to the Sun, even if it would begin tearing away my hydrogen, a trail fading behind my still-growing bulk. Our mutual gravitational pull was too much to resist. I, a young, eager, child of the proto-planetary disk, had to cling close to my parent. And I would have if it weren’t for my pesky sibling, Saturn. Did it really have to yank me back like that? Did it have to drag me so far out that the sun became so small in my skies? Then again, that vain planet with its countless rings, probably just wanted someone like itself to keep it company. It wanted nothing to do with those runty “ice giants” beyond us. Y’know, Uranus and Neptune. Frankly, I didn’t care much for them either. Still rude of it to come up behind me like that and yank me back out beyond the frostline! Just unacceptable.
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